Awesome job!

You did a great job with this, I would of liked to hear more of the piano and/or the bass drum a little louder, but it's not enough to effect the 10/10 and the 5/5
Keep up the good work and keep on rocking!

well pulled off

This track's fairly intricate and it sounds clean and professional, I can hear all the different instruments well. The vox were the least interesting part to me only because they sound a lot like standard pop-punk (Blink 182 and such). The rest is sick and quite original.

Great!

Hold your breath if you're sleeping and you're not alone.

This song was very emotional as you probably intended it to be, and it gives me salvation in a quite complicated way actually. Truth is, the reason you were getting a 9/10, but still 5/5, is because you didn't write the lyrics in your author's comment. My only complaint, and since its not really related to the song itself, you still get a 10/10.

Intro/Outro: Really digged the sound of the guitar and synths in the intro, and the outro was pretty abrupt but hey, the solo was fitting so its all good.

Lyrics: Really liked the chorus, could relate to it well. This reminds me of many of them women I try to converse with, (and fail miserably) and what I would be like if a long term relationship with a woman came to a close.

Beat/SFX: Liked the piano and the guitar (I think) in the intro then the electric that kicks in after the bass, all in all, this segment is pretty badass.

Conclusion: I really love this song, and after listening to it for a couple of days I've had a bit of a self-esteem when it comes to girls, thanks for that, but alas, it will probably still be a while. But hey, this is something to be proud of, and I'm sure you are.

Other:
-In the Intro, you may want to raise the initial volume of the piano and guitar as the first time I heard this song it was on my speakers and I turned up the volume to hear the Intro better, then got blasted with (awesome) electrical guitar high notes, which was unpleasant, as my internet glitched out for a second and the end-result was about 5 seconds of super loud ass music that blasted my eardrums. It hurt.

But, anyway, great work here, until next time!
Sjs00-

Very nice

Loved every part of this, lyrics very nice and fit well with the music. Because i'm generous 10/10 I'll keep an eye out for new submissions from you.

solo

wow, now that solo remind me of some 90s video game show music or something, 10 for the solo.