Hold Your Breath WIP

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Hold Your Breath WIP

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A longer version of the loop i submitted recently.
There are several problems but i'm moving all my stuff to another computer and there are some problems with this project.Hopefully when i set my new production computer up, i'll be able to edit this track.Not alot of variation right now but i think it will keep your attention.
Cheers !

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NeuralFusion

2010-09-22 02:03:56

Tasty

Good shit man, really love the in and out feel on this one would love too collab or get you in a little dnb crew im starting up!

MA3HbO responds:

Glad you like it !
A collab sounds nice indeed.
Send me a PM with some details (AIM, Email, etc.) if you want.
Cheers and stay tuned.

glitcho

2010-09-20 13:38:44

i do agree with kulajs

you put so much emphasis on the beat, the bassline is placed top2, that's not right :D give the bass more intensity and individuality! it's quite good though. one more thing, diverse the drums a bit. also i'd make the kick drum a bit quieter and put the main emphasis on the snare.

the atmos were great!

keep it ez!

MA3HbO responds:

Cheers man !
Thanks for the tips.
I'm not satisfied with the bass either.I'll probably lower the drums a bit and cut some of the lows on the bass (to make it cleaner) , cause its a bit lower than needed.I hope that when i edit it, it will be more to your liking.
Stay tuned !

PS. I just submitted a new WIP so you can check it and tell me what you think.

kulajs

2010-09-20 11:03:26

Great intro!!!

Also like the beat and maybe you should work more on bassline but i like it!!!

MA3HbO responds:

Thanks !
The song is overall very repetitive so there is alot more to be desired.
And yeah, the baseline indeed needs some work.I'll stick a few EQs up her ass.