Not bad
I have been working on my first House song, which I finally completed today, and it is definitely more simplified than the typical Trance genre, especially when it comes to leads. Your lead in this song was kinda dry and could have used some more layering. Perhaps a sawtooth bass or square stabs.
Not bad, just break up the repetitive lead every so often then come back to the main lead. House is about the staggering.