A For Effort
I really liked where you were going with this. I would have given it a 5/5 if it was a little less rough around the edges. The horns and trumpets specifically sounded out of place with the atmospheric moans and full electronic sounds. Also, I can tell you meant a lot of the sour notes, but I'm not sure if you intended all of them--and I think it was a few too many. (I'm no musician, so I hope that makes sense)
I loved the piano intro and the bass that crops up in the "heavy rock" section of the song.
As it is, it's a piece an Earthbound junkie can love (like myself), but with a little bit of polish it could be something everyone could love.