i made a form for marx... (kirby superstar)

that is controlled...
by the pure evil: GIYGAS!
the two are unstoppable...
marx giygas.
after kirby wins against marx giygas, he has to make giygas return to his own dimension...
this could be giygas' theme.
anyway, i love it.

A For Effort

I really liked where you were going with this. I would have given it a 5/5 if it was a little less rough around the edges. The horns and trumpets specifically sounded out of place with the atmospheric moans and full electronic sounds. Also, I can tell you meant a lot of the sour notes, but I'm not sure if you intended all of them--and I think it was a few too many. (I'm no musician, so I hope that makes sense)

I loved the piano intro and the bass that crops up in the "heavy rock" section of the song.

As it is, it's a piece an Earthbound junkie can love (like myself), but with a little bit of polish it could be something everyone could love.

Not bad.

I give it a 10/10 i really love the opening of it. Oh im also giving it a 5/5.