Duuude...
It's good, I was even about to download it but... then I've heard your voice :/ You sound like me after 10 drinks or something... No offence. But it's still a good song.
Simple metal the whole family can enjoy. EXCEPT FOR THE SISTER O:<
Seriously though, this was too easy for me to make, the chord progressions and everything. I was considering placing this in Pop for fun, maybe I'll place some deathcore or something there or something. xP
But anyways, don't rag on me TOO bad about the vocals, since I'm still a bitter newbling when it comes to singing, I learned a bit alrad just from this submission.
Riffworks T4 - Instantdrummer - Line 6 POD Farm - Audacity, Biznatchezles.
Lyrics:
There's something wrong with me x4
Something wrong x2
Can't you tell?
Something wrong
Can't you tell?
There's something wrong with me x5
So bottled up, frequently
Something wrong with me x2
Something taking me down x2
Something wrong x2
Can't you tell?
Something wrong
Can't you tell?
There's something wrong with me x5
So bottled up, frequently
Duuude...
It's good, I was even about to download it but... then I've heard your voice :/ You sound like me after 10 drinks or something... No offence. But it's still a good song.
LOL, I understand dude, your review made me laugh real hard. My voice sucks hard, I know, but I could always could re-upload this song, but instead as an instumental. :O
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this isn't bad at all dude, got a pretty nice flow throughout the whole song. very simple playing, but shit don't need to be complicated to kick ass. well played, a solid performance. drums are pretty awesome, and again, good job on the eq. the mixing sounds really good as well.
vocals aren't flawless, but they're decent. you don't need a singer, you just need practice. you sound pretty hesitant, you need to practicing giving your vocals more power. try getting some distance to the mic, and don't doubt your abilities. this is still a good start.
lyrics are a bit repetitive for my taste, but pretty cool nonetheless. good song dude, i enjoyed it. keep it up \m/
I only planed a few lines of the lyrics, and you're right, I'm very hesitant, and I was right up against the thing lol, you have good intuition, Schleif. I may have another person sing with me, and we harmonize, or I'll sing backup or something, but I may continue singing, it's going to take time as you said.
This isa repetitive song, indeed, it only took me a few seconds to come up with the riffs, which were also relatively unplanned, the drums and bass I spent the most time on. Apparently, Audacity has a tone altering device that allows you to change the tones of crap so they're a different pitch, I may use more of that in the future. \m/
I'll try to be quick
Since I know you said don't rag too hard on the vocals so I will make this quick, do yourself a favor and find yourself a singer. Also not a big fan of the vocal melody. The instrumentals on the other hand sound great and the only thing I am missing there is a solo, in my opinion with very few exceptions a great solo is what makes a metal song great.
You know what? You're probably completely right, my vocals are fairly sub-par, and so is my singing too. And thank you about your honest opinion about my instruments, I appreciate it immensely, you're like the first person to review one of my songs in like forever. O_o
If I also may mention something, I was actually planning on placing this in the 'Pop' section, since it's not really metal enough lol due to t he lack of soloing, but I don't think everyone would so much appreciate that.
But I like that change, thanks mucho, if you need reviewing, message me pronto.
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