I really like the song and the pad and the melody and the synths you used are really trancey which makes me want to listen to the song. But the percussion wasn't too good. So if you can work on the percussion again, that would be good. Add some up and down sweeps..could help giving the song a bit of energy.
Gonna vote 5 but the song truely deserves 4 but i dont want to get your vote rate down lol.
P.S : MAKE IT LONGER lol
yeah, it needs something there... something to boost it a little bit more.. then its full 10/10
anyway, nice song
Needs some variation
Overall, a good piece of work. The only thing that i would have to say is, add some variation at points. Add a second variation on the melody, or a third. The whole song passed a little fast and it seemed mostly to be the same thing. However, that doesn't change that this is the start to a great song.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.