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Nov 5, 2005 | 7:01 PM EST
File Info
1.8 MB
1 min 59 sec
2.83 / 5.00

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Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.

Rated 2.83 / 5 stars
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519 Plays | 182 Downloads
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Electronic - Industrial

Author Comments

Listen to the whole song, its a deep gloomy song, bass, a little funky... I dunno xD



Rated 3 / 5 stars

A little too soft in the sound

The tempo sounded pretty good, but the entire thing overall was a little too soft, making it not very hearable if it were to go into a movie and someone's watching it with crappy speakers. It also repeated itself during the beginning and middle parts too. But I'd have to say I liked the near-ending part. Sounded like a piece from "Move it" (think "I like to move it, move it). So it wasn't a great audio but it wasn't near bad.


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not bad..

One thing I could suggest is to add some sort of pad to add more depth to your song.

Slow your drums down too- they take away from the mood.
And don't be afraid to throw a supporting melody on top of what you have going already. Alternating between the melodies makes for nice dynamics.

Otherwise- keep at it. You can only get better.
I mean, listen to my old stuff and compare it to my new stuff.

JimDaSpiff responds:

Sweet suggestions man xD, sadly I am still running the demo and cant edit anything now. Future songs will catch these tips TY!