sweet
10/10 awesome
Author Comments
This is my first song that is not a cover, submitted as a WIP.
I kinda poked at this song for a while trying to think of what to add, what things to make with it, and its still ongoing but I thought I might aswell submit it as is right now till its done.
Hopefully it sounds good so far.
Edit: Seems as though this one wont be finished for a while. Nexus with all the packs is too big so till I get a new drive, I can't complete this one. Sorry guys. -.-
Thanks, Zerest.
Nice
Also a very nice tune. The main melody is very interesting and you don't get tired of it quickly. The synths you used sound great and a sound really bouncy and happy. You must be really talented with the piano.
The drums have a real subtle and professional sound to them, and the background pad sounds great and totally blends in perfect. Much like your other song, this is also awesome. Keep up the great work!!
steven-mcl responds:
Lol, thanks man. :D This is when I was trying to figure out a sound for myself, so I made this song as a test in what I can do. Silv3Ster (DJGST) helped me out a bit in the mastering cause I couldn't figure out what I could do with it at the time, but this is what I came up with when making a random melody. I've never taken any Piano lessons so this is just out of my mind for melody. Looks like I've got something that works. :P Thanks for the review.
- Zerest
Nice
-Really nice fruity melody you have going here. Enjoyable to listen to and it sounds very interesting to the ear. Even though it stays very consistent it doesn't get repetitive. But i'll have to agree with Dj-GST in the fact that adding a few more melodies into the mix wouldn't be a bad idea. Would give it more variety and length to the song.
-Review Request Club
steven-mcl responds:
Ah, ok, ill see what I can do with it, thank you very much for your reply. Means a lot to have some feedback on getting my songs sounding better.
Also, off topic, nice Earth Dijinn.
Sounds good so far.
Sounds pretty good so far dude, I would say all you have to do is maybe add another melody or two, change up the drums a bit more, and add a bassline.
4/5 8/10
steven-mcl responds:
Yeah, im gonna have to add more to it, ill think of something but its gonna take a while before I probably even think of any melodies.
Thanks for the Review.
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