Impressive....most Impressive
One of the signs of true skill is that there is a constant improvement - and you have definetely shown that! It seems each new song you create builds on your last. You take what you have learned and make it better and you learn from your mistakes, this is the making of greatness, I really mean that!
As far as this song specifically goes, it's really good, and I really like the changes that you made, and the bassline is much more natural now - and pleasing to the ear - I agree with Chimy, it has an overall more "pro" feel. It's like you are in total control of each of the different elements of this song and bend them effortlessly to make something very cool, great job- I'm looking forward to the final version - I will be watching your progress with great interest...(that's two star wars quotes in one review..)