Good job for experimenting.

But make the drums sound cleaner and be quite a bit faster, so as to have a feeling of liquid dnb, and take out the synth at 1:09 and replace it with a very smooth, liquid-ish sound. Meh. Good job, though.

Look up the ice dance from Bachelors of Science and also Let Go of the Release by Amplicon to get what I'm talking about. Definitely looking at your other tracks. :D