Hall of the Techno Viking!
Great job, but it does get a little repetitive! Also, I feel the "swing" feel doesn't truly fit this song too much. Other than that, VERY good song!
i don't like it that much.
the gated saw which carries the melody doesn't fit to the melody.
also theres a lack of baseline carrying the mood of the theme. the way you interpreted the theme is not satisfying. the atmosphere is simply missing.
only using the theme is like trying to drive a car without a motor. it looks pretty but doesn't get you anywhere. you didn't even really try to catch the original mood in anyway did you ;)
The motor you created for your car is too weak for your car. use the contrabass string u used in the beginning and in the mid and add it under the melody to carry the original spirit would sound a lot better in my humble opinion.
but i got to say that the effects you used on this tracks are good like the distorted saws in the beginning, they carry a bit of the aggression of the theme.
needs some work but it's affordable ;)
Thats a really good idea, using the string bass underneath, it hadn't crossed my mind, thanks for the input