well

let me start out by saying, he has nice vision. the drum placement is unique and catchy, and the sounds are quite nice, all that needs to be done is for him to add a breakdown or a buiild-up somewhere in the song, and perhaps add a few more instrumental elements to complete the sound, maybe add some harder hitting bass closer to the end and change the drum sequence up alittle so it wont get repetetive to other listeners that aren't as nice as me....:P

but other that that i think it's a very goood first song. and it shall get my respect
10/10
-mrlove