At first..
At first I was really impressed, but when it hit the 01:00 mark, it kindda felt akward for me, as the guitar followed it got pretty tight, could do a nice chronus and the beginning, tried freestyling to it and it has a really nice flow.
Keep on going dude, it's great. Maybe not fantastic, cause I'm not use to this sort of sound, but great nonetheless, will be looking forward to your work.