This could use a background melody to it, some strings, and a nice bass to go with the song, and it will sound a lot more pleasing to the air. but your getting there, so keep going
Thanks for the review. I created this a while ago, like 8 months. So I don't actually have the project since back then I used the demo of FL Studio so I couldn't save my project, but maybe if I can remember the melody and all of that I could remake it. Thanks :P
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.