Good pieces, but whole = ?
I want to be overall positive, because the individual elements/beats/synths/layers are nice. But it's like every layer/element is in an entirely different key, and hearing them at the same time is ... well it's not pleasant. If what you were going for was jarring and dissonant. then you're dead on. But it was honestly hard to listen to the whole thing. Again, I'm not trying to say that it was all bad because I liked your selection of beats and sounds, etc. But most of the time as soon as you layer one on another, they're in completely different keys. So I guess how good it is depends on what you were trying to do with it.
alright, thanks for actually being honest. its better than most comments, everyone needs a little constructive critisism. i was kinda going for a, not creepy, more suspenceful, but still a chill-out type of song, not going with heavy bass. i was trying out different pitches, and to me it sounded a little off, but i like to hear feedback to reassure me, ill work out the pitches and put it back on here