Good pieces, but whole = ?

I want to be overall positive, because the individual elements/beats/synths/layers are nice. But it's like every layer/element is in an entirely different key, and hearing them at the same time is ... well it's not pleasant. If what you were going for was jarring and dissonant. then you're dead on. But it was honestly hard to listen to the whole thing. Again, I'm not trying to say that it was all bad because I liked your selection of beats and sounds, etc. But most of the time as soon as you layer one on another, they're in completely different keys. So I guess how good it is depends on what you were trying to do with it.