ur gettin better

Good piece, good movement, great arrangement (all the little pieces work very well together). What you simply need is better sounds. I don't know what you use, but if it's Reason or Fruityloops, download more sounds, mes with them until you are blue in the face and/or use effects more effectively.

Peace up a town down.

LL

hey man.

i thought id leave a review.

This song jumps straight into it.
I thought that the song would be very iffy because of the cheap techno drums and the obvious presets, but..so far its pretty good.
i like the melody.
there is one thing bugging me though.
you have some kind of bell instrument going that is kind of throwing the song off...cause your pitch-flanging it.
by now that little fast hi hat is kinda gettin on my nerves...maybe turn it down?
This doesnt really fall under 'trance'...

id say more of 'dance'.
it has a large techno influence, but its very danceable.
kudos on that.
This melody is very addictive.
the fade off at the end made me pretty dissapointed.
i would have put a little more effort into the ending.

my summary:
quatlity: Some of the instruments needed to be turned up and whatnot, but pretty decent there.

arrangment: repetitve, but thats what dance is.

insutruments: it didnt seem like you made one yourself, so not to much effort right there.

good job overall.

7/10

Z3N0N--_--
P.S. if you still wanna collab, talk to me on MSN.

Good Song!

Trance is far from my favorite type of music I like to hear, but this was an exception.

The effects were really cool, and I liked xylophone type instrument in the backround.

Also, it was amazing how many sounds and instruments I was hearing! It was hard for me to make out all the different parts.

Well, great job

Check out my music if you'd like (rate or review if you want)