Eh...

I don't really like it, but judging from this song I would definitely say you have potential to create some great tunes. It was really laid back, which sounded good, I just didn't like the bass at all.

haha nice!

this is a big improvement from that what I've heard from you for a while!
at this moment it seems to be pretty empty, kinda dull... just add something more in there, it sounds good so far!

just keep it up man!