okay, but...

very creative, but it seems the instruments were fighting each other... i think you have to remaster this.

and you need to find some good drum samples.

Be creative!

I hear some preset loops in there.... also watch out for your snare... its a little.... off. its playing too late. Also, very distorted sounds over very distorted sounds make it sound like a meat grinder... dunno if that's what you're looking for.

your kick needs MORE. sounds like you went a DnB way to play... but would have been better with a techno pounder. Google search "free samples *** " where the ** is equal to what you're looking for (kicks, hi hats ect ect.)
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Pretty low rating for me... sorry, BUT at least it was in the right time signature, so you've got one up on some of the other artists lol.