MUCH Better
I don't know what happened for you to lose your data, but you definitely rebuilt it well... with many improvements - especially the opening buildup.
What's also better is that the track keeps you interested the entire time. Your transitions are smooth, and the melody is just the right amount of repetitive. This type of music makes a great soundtrack for a video game or an appropriate film project.
The track is bizarre and unique. A wild ride of resonating, ringy pads and brassy synths. Very creative approach to music, my friend. This deserves a solid 10.