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This is very smooth but one thing I think you need to work on is building things up I fee like this song has no build up just a constant flow makes it less exciting in my opinion.
I also would suggest working on the bass I can barley hear it over everything else
I agree with the guy below me that the melody has a wired feeling which I am not saying is bad its different and I like different.
I think the drums could of had more variation instep of the constant 4 X 4 kick but its not to bad
Good work :):):):
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But great. Smooth, good use of the piano btw, nice transition from classical to funky, but sort of without climax. The melody is strange and peaceful. It don't have a feel of jarredness in it, so I gave the melody a 9. I wondered if you could give a touch of interupted cadence to the melody, and also, if you could do more drums. The drums bring a nice touch to the melody. I give it a 9.
Keep up the good work!!
Haha, yeah.... my bad on the strange melody. I'll try to do more drums on the following song I'm producing. Thank you for your feedback and thanks again for reviewing!
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