I like the song, but your voice is a little shakey
I like everything about the song, but the way you couldn't stay in key was a little unpleasant.
The song is nice, but the highpassed voice is a bit too loud, overpowering the instruments. The pronunciation is not super, it's okay but a bit strange. I like the breathed sound though and the alternation of the voice and the drums is nice. Strings are a nice touch too.
It's good, but needs some mastering