A little too much
Pretty good, most of the song was repetitive and i don't see how the title goes with the song. But you are still much better than what is actually on the front page right now.
Thanks for the positive feedback man. And well, as for the repetitiveness, I like to take the name "Trance" To a more literal term. The repetitive melody is supposed to be what entrances you.
But to each his own, and thanks for actually taking the time to write something :]