This is a song written by my friend Brittany Lascelles, with myself accompanying her on guitar.
Criticism and comments very welcome :)
I like the syncopated riffs
The syncopated stops really set the song off, very energetic and catchy. Toward the end it seems to lose its energy and shifts to something much softer, musically well performed but it loses the energy and captivity the beginning holds. Pretty solid for an effort without bass or drums. Try adding that and you will have one of the better songs on this site.
thanks for the review, will take what you said in mind!!
Love this
The guitar is amazing, well written riffs and progressions.
As for the vocals...OH MY GOD, i have no words for how perfect the vocals are, she has a very beautiful voice. and the harmony is sultry and dulcet.
as for the lyrics, well they are awesome...
overall
Pros EVERYTHING
Cons NOTHING
Amazing Work...
If you want some piano or anything hit me up i would love to collab with amazing artists...
Keep on keeping on man
--DJNet
Thanks heaps, itzs greazt to hear things like this from people!
awsome
great voice if you could get songs like this on cd i can get it stores in a week if my freind likes it
Really? I could definately get this stuff on a cd, the machine I use has an in built cd burner! We've got a few more almost done as well. Cheers for the review!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
EL-Poncho 
DancarMar 
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PixxlMan 
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