I really dig the vibe, but your lyrics and flow could use work. You got dope sound though man. My advice to you, is the same to all aspiring lyricists.
Get a rhymebook, and fill the bitch up. When you get to the last page, read your first and laugh at how bad you used to be.
Thanks for the advice man. Means a lot, from you. I've been writing actually since 8th grade. Thing is, I think I'm trying to focus on delivery, and just Having a good time while I do it ya know.
I hope this isnt an insult. It reminds me of J5. And there is nothing wrong with that! Nothing damnit!
great vibe on this track! a true old skool track! nice!!!!
This is a funny song :].
Use more of my beats
NO doubt. Defnitely will yo.
ps. What part of Dallas are you from? I'm from Plano