dance dance all night long

lol cool song

Dont advertise..

Dont advertise...especially on other peoples music... This geting you 0's.. nice going...

Don't advertise on other peoples' music.

"DONT advertise on others songs. I feel no shame 0 bombing you for this. Besides the song isn't even very good in the first place. Like what snoops said learn some dang manners"

Summed up all right there. 0.

Needs some remastering

The syncopation doesn't work at all during 00:21 - 00:40. The song just gets too cluttered and it's impossible to tell where you are trying to go with the song. Other than that, it contains a decent melody but lacks variation. The whole song could be shortened to about a 40 second loop, and that could also fix your weak fade out. Anyways, I'll avoid getting on your ass about advertising where you shouldn't. I'm sure you've had enough of that.

Well... That was... Boring?

If i have to be honest, it wasn't very interesting, though i kind of liked some parts of the track- Interminable! That's the word. It was two minutes of the same beat and so on.

And as i was looking at the higher ranked tracks i could see that you were advertising on THEIR work. Witch is just... Unacceptable.
If you want your work to be heard, find another way to do it, because people will just sigh when they see what you write on other peoples work. That won't help you at all.

BUT- because this is your first track, and it wasn't a total failure, i have to encourage you to keep on trying.

And for the other people that reviewed this track and just told you to go to hell, and didn't really care for the song much, I'll say: THAT is "douchebaggery".