It's ok, but....
The song's theme is alright, but it really doesn't have any punch. Put some strong notes in there (like adding drumbeats and better bass) and this could be a lot more intense!
This one I started long ago, with the first drum, bass and plucked sound. The time has passed and I didn't know what to do. Someday I just opened it, and continued it, and I liked. Some tome later, it was done. I feel good about this music, and it's supposed to be a mess sometimes. This name, Siege in the Volcano, were the first thing I've done in the music. So, I was thinking to make something fast since the beggining. Well, it's 168bpm, if someone would like to know. The icon, I've made on Photoshop CS3.
Plugins I've used: Nexus, Vengeance ClubSounds/SoundEffects and Edirol Orchestral VST plugin.
I hope you all like this music! Thanks.
It's ok, but....
The song's theme is alright, but it really doesn't have any punch. Put some strong notes in there (like adding drumbeats and better bass) and this could be a lot more intense!
Um , it was okay at the least.
I don't think any of my advice could help you since it sounds like you just started working with fruity loops.
Not trying to come off as an asshole.
But you are at least trying to produce some tunes which I will score you for the effort.
5/5 { im nice }
7/10 { really nice }
Keep learning , keep producing, you will keep getting better trust me.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.