Cool!

Ye I like it, the piano is awesome! The melodies fit very nicely and all the other stuff goes nicely! The snare roll at the start or like the first gets a bit repetitive after a while, you could vary it up or vary up the dynamics! The piano part is by far my favourite! The other instruments sound a bit old school synth style, add some reverb to give them a bit more depth perhaps? Or play with the dynamics? I'm sure you could make them sound nicer! :)

Take the piano part, add some dynamics and make it LONGER!!!! :D

Good stuff! Keep up the good work! :)

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so i think that you did a really good job with the arrangement. this really gives off an epic feel. the way it progressed was not predictable at first glance--which is actually a rarity 'round these parts--and the piano lull built some tension.

i just think the production is pretty bland, but it's not really your fault. i just think everything sounds too synthetic. the way the violin never plays sharply, the snare sounds so bland, and the piano doesnt play with dynamics enough to convey the emotion it tries to. it sounds like, yeah, a soundtrack to a playstation 1 song, not a scored production or anything, which, if that's what you were going for, then all the more power to ya.

all of this are things that are remedied with... well... getting better samples, not really with your skill as a producer. so i'm willing to overlook that, because this had great imagination and still got its message across. good job!