Intencity perfectly captured

But. It's so short, it's a shame.. The feeling that you're seemingly trying to express comes out perfectly well, but doesn't last long enough, the intro lasts half the tune and the tune lasts only a minute and a bit, of course, if it was your intention to make it short but powerful so to say then I havent said a word, but just saying it would be absolutely awesome if you would be able to make it last some 2 or 2 and a half minutes without losing too much epicness (though i can imagine that to be quite hard..)

One of the greatest songs i've ever heard

Amazing. Just truly amazing. Keep up the good work.

Amazing.

This short piece is amazing. I love the sound. I don't have anything to criticize, haha. Fantastic work! I'm glad I discovered your music, you are truly an amazing composer!
I can't wait to hear your future work! :D

*About the pauses - I think they fit in rather well. I have played in an orchestra for 8 years and we played quite a few epic songs with rests and short pauses like the ones in this song.*

Epic

It IS epic, the feel is there and the instruments are there, you're just missing a few things. First of all no epic piece pauses like this did, there is always a background from the orchestra going. I have also nevere heard of an "EPIC" piece so short, otherwise GOOD JOB.

much better

much better than the other stuff.
good work.