I feel that the song is very well balanced and a pleasure to listen several times. I guess here's been some serious working hours spent on it.
Lots of serious working hours were put into this track and still are being put into this track.
You can listen to the original release of this track in my song archive here.
its in 3 parts called new leaf turned.
This is the first of the 6 part series to get rebuilt and rereleased. the other parts will be released again as i feel they are up to professional standards.
Thanx for listening and leaving a review
Better build up than the other one
The other one got straight into it.
This one built itself up to a nice melody for a bit. But again, it was the same few bars or so of each instrument over and over again.
I do see that you put the layers on them so that it wasn't exactly the same. And there IS 2 new parts. They were there, but it took what, 3 minutes before you see them. After that, they come together reasonably nicely.
But I still feel like there is a problem with the actual putting the different parts together. I think all of the instruments are trying to be heard over the top of each other or something like that.
I will look into that for future mixes of this track. I had some other professional advice for the intro also. the idea is getting the track to where it has good clarity and tight percs to the beat. if those fall in line perfectly the melody or parts that seem repetitive will be all the more addictive. normally i dont keep anything steady in my tracks.
Thanks for taking a close listen to the track. and see you around!
Man this i swhy i love traance, techno, elctronica and ambient... its so visual :}
There are only a select few dance artists that actually impress me and have helped me greatly in learning my techniques and to just make more than a song but an experience.
some of my biggest inspirations to dance include:
Gabriel & Dresden
the world is a cruel place indeed. survive. survive
But it is the future that you must survive before the present.
Although i've listened to the original at least 40 times, I LOVE this song.
Currently its the 2nd top played on my ipod (2nd only to Pennywise) and is the only techno song on my top 25 played... Haha.
So since i liked the original so much, this review might be a lil biased.
The additions were definitely great, and i could hardly tell that it wasnt produced in an actual studio.
Some of the synths sounded a little cheesy, but not TOO bad.
This song has been so much inspiration for me when i write, and to hear it being rebuilt, i'm really excited.
KEEP ME UPDATED!!! haha.
Anways good work, man.
Wow I had no idea I was ranked 2nd on your ipod charts! Awesome Sethkorn
And thank you for the advice I will work out the kinks on the synths a lil more to make them sound less cheesy for the final rundown of this track.
You will be the first to know of the next rebuild of this track expect more!
Peace and compose on!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.