You need more speed

D&B is all about it and adding interesting sounds to the brakes
you need yto work more

maby

add a harder kick with a great punch

the synth is sounding awesome with the delay effect

maby change the melody so you get a more stable song to work on or just leave it this way it sounds cool anyway

maby add a soft pad that flows with the melody to give it an atmoshperic feel to it i think this song would be great if you aply the upgrades :D

btw chek on my song too called : japaneese trance!

thanks