Amazing.

All I can say is, I shun that guy below me. You may not have been experienced at the time you made this, but it does sound pretty pro to me.
Note at his last sentence, I think the melodies together are beautiful, and hey, just about EVERY song puts two melodies on top of eachother. It's like musical sex.
He can shove it up his ass, I wouldn't take it he's better at composing music than you are.
I say this is a pretty good start, or was. You've gotten so much better.
And you've earned yourself a fan.
5/5

Not all too bad

Rather decent song. I can tell you're not all too experienced, but still doing the job somewhat.
Two different tunes on top of each other? Hmm...