nice one, groovy but not too fast, a kind of heavy feeling who fits well, why not doing a loopable one? you should
I say a few drums would add a nice touch to it but over all even with out drums I like the Melodie its a little all over the place but some how it seems to fit together keep up the good work ^ ^.
Thank you, I'm trying to improve and ill take your comment in consideration :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.