Could use work
Hmm needs alot more work imo, The beat is too simple for the sample, the preloaded loops plus the constant sample make ths song a bit annoying. Maby adding more vocal samples or a different type of drum pattern would make it a bit less repeitive. maby even lowering the sample pitch could do the trick.
I did not make this too serious, just to bother. I was playing with the sample, added a beat & thats it. Nothing to serious. It would kinda be hard to make a real song with that sample...