nice one

at 00:49 the action starts, thats what i wuld like to hear more of :)

Love the melodies..

This song could sound so powerful if it were mastered a little better. I loved the melodies and synth sounds you used in this. It was in a beautiful key too ^^

Lol, the vocals sound like they were done in FL Studio. The fruity vocoder eats up lower frequencies and distorts them slightly.

I really liked the lyrics though. And from what I heard through the vocoder, you have a great singing voice.

Pretty good overall. Just needs some mastering and levelling to bring out the loudness.