Just by the way, it changes a whole lot. It gets better at about 0:42.
I like this one. It's the first heavy song I've been really satisfied with. It still needs mixing, like pretty much all my songs. I really wanted to convey the emotion of appreciation in this. A sort of guilty appreciation.
I have some lyrics to it, and I might record them and upload that version. I might make an altered loop version of it (techno, maybe). I think some of the musical phrases would work well in a loop.
I'd love to know what you think, so by all means review.
Enjoy :D
That what I love to listen
Quickly, it is true that the rhythm guitar and drums would need to be arranged.
But if not for the melody is perfect! I love this style of music where you try to remove emotions. You can listen to my music, they might inspire you a bit because they go to the same goal (I think ...)
Keep up the great job;)
Thanks man!
The guitar/drums combo needs touching up, you're right.
I'm glad you like the melody, it's one of my favourite ones I've written.
Thanks for reviewing, might check your stuff out soon :D
COOL!
I loved it man. faved 5'd and 10nd!
Glad you like it, man!
Good Music
Ok. I'll go first...
The Pros: The best part of the song is the melodies and harmonies used. Nothing is out of tune and it conveys the story successfully. The arrangement is also satisfying bringing nice highs and lows to the table.
That being said I don't have any problems with those part and I think this is a nice piece of emotional music.
The Cons: it's the sound I'm having problems with. To be exact it's the contrasting quality of the beautifully sounding piano with the awfully sounding sampled guitarwork and bad frequencies on the drumset (almost no kick and the hihats hurt a little) + although the filter sweep bringing the song in it's heavy part works very well, the resonance should be lowered to avoid ear pain.
Overall: It's a good piece of solid musicianship that could use a bit better mixing. Because of the sound I thus rate this: 4/5 8/10
thanks man.
Yeah, I know what you mean. The mixing is a bit shabby, something I need to get around to. I can see what you're saying about the drums. I really like the double kick and you totally can't hear it properly. I'll totally change that. The guitar might get a little fix-up in it's effects. It's mixing is a bit poor too.
Thanks for taking the time to review, man, and telling me how I can improve it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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