Fix it up a bit

I must agree with rav3shaw, Just mix things up a bit , too much of the exact same kind of sound over and over again. You do have a starting idea of it though, and I do like the sound of it. All good music creators start somewheres (:

hmm

this one is one of your better ones, but you need to stop using the same common, feel-good chord progression over and over. while it is truly a magnificent chord progression when used correctly, you use it as a crutch because it is easy to jam to and create accompaniments with.