i think your playing it in the wrong key witch gives it a demented feel
but you did an amazing job on your theme song for mlss: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/330171
I only changed the key because the bells add a higher pitch than the natural note but it doesn't sound demented to me or anyone else
Good choice of instruments. Nice use of reverb. Very peaceful. I can just close my eyes and drift to sleep listening to this.
I can hear there is more than bells in this track, although I can barely hear the other instruments. The bells drown out the strings, giving them a faint sound. Making sure each instrument is heard clearly would be the only thing to improve on.
Aside from that, good work!
thanks for the review
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.