What's wrong with the votes???
I give this a 5/5 just to crank it up, 'cause it certainly deserves a bigger score. I've heard faaaar worse here on NG.
I'd say that at least 80% of the song melodies and harmonies work properly. The rest seems a bit random, but that's creative freedom.
What I really like is the mood and the tempo dynamics, the ups and downs if you will... memories are just like that, a little bit of both.
Cheerz mate & keep on creating :D