THE RED POET

THE RED POET

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Lyrics are insane. One thing I'd say is think about putting them in the author comments just so people have a chance to read them through. Your diction's pretty good, even with the faster passages, but even then some people might have a hard time understanding. But generally, they sounded really good and you pulled them off smoothly. The breaks into the sung vocals were a nice touch, though I think you sounded stronger the second time than the first; the first sounded a little wobbly and kinda nervous, but the second sounded pretty ace. The high note at 3:05 felt a little out-of tune, but not very much so. Nice work on the freestyled lyrics as well xD. I've heard people just run out of lyrics and stop trying, but you incorporated it into the song well, so it didn't seem that bad, so kudos for that.

The beat behind was pretty simple, I think you could have changed it up between the spoken and sung sections, but that's not that big of a deal. It was pretty downplayed, so it had a lot of emotion in it and allowed the words to take precedence over the track. In general, this was just really nicely done. Work on that final verse and I think you'd be golden. Keep it up.

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Nice

-The lyrics are great and flow well. Most of the time you sound great but occasionally when you go for longer drawn out notes you sound a bit wobbly and off tune. Try to keep everything concise since you pull of the lyrics so much better when you say them quickly.

-The beat in the background goes well too but it could be interchanged for something else and still sound good.

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4.20 / 5.00

4.26 / 5.00 (+ 0.067)
lol, this belongs on an album bro. And if that's the actual final verse that fits pretty well, n i like how u change perspective=) very well done sir

Can't wait for the finished product.

Wow its good. It's good!

Could you include lyrics in the ''Author comment'', it has nothing to do with your voice but im not English so some things can be tricky to hear and may be misunderstood, and I do not want that.

I love story telling rap, cant wait for the finished product. Can't wait for more KO3 rounds either, buh yeah. hehe, keep it up. loved mr.Jones as well. Ganja

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