I did this earlier this afternoon since I didn't have any homework for a change! I hope you like it! :D
"Your not the one, I'm so sorry. " (2x's)
good melody
but the melody gets gets drowned out by to much distortion and there is to much sustain on each chord. but when you hear the melody its clear and nice but you need to clear that up its very indie very nice and when you fix it add some percussion in it i like the end its soothing :)
Thanks for checking this out and reviewing it! :D Yeah, I may have to fix how thick I had the distortion. I'll definitely see what I can do about the lack of drums. A lot of my tunes are really hurting for them.
Cool
I like this alot. You really made it up cause you didnt have homework? Impressive.
5/5 10/10
Thanks a ton for the ratings and favorite, compadre! :D Yeah, that's really all there was to my making it. Hahaha, since I was kicked from my last band a few months ago, I'll just make songs like this to stay on top of things when I have the time.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
neoshaolin 
