is max my voting pow put you up one
The idea is good. Your 'bass' needs to be lowered an octave or more in the piano roll to be effective for bass, at least if this is going to be a DnB track. There weren't quite enough breaks in the drumline either. I recommend some lower nasty bass like the 3XOsc preset Nasty, or maybe some hoover from the 3Xosc or Sytrus, if using FL Studio
I was just messing around, it took about 30 mins in total.
if i was to spent more time, im sure i can pull somthing alot better off.. but ive got a terrible attention span xD.. ill work smthing out :)