This song is your greatest piece,Keep them coming!
now thats my style
My theme song for the angel inside of my Fan Character.
Renegade Angel Chaos. Half good half evil, 100% renegade.
Anyway, the synth was good, but the kick needed more power behind it. It was a good choice though. The Melody itself was a good idea, but the synths didnt seem to flow together right. Overall 8/10 for the stuff i pointed out, but a 5/5 for the song itself.
I really, like how you use the drums, kinda hiphop:y and still not. But really awesome nevertheless.
I can see the potential, but there is just one thing that bothers me, and I'm not sure if people might agree with me, but personally the higher tones on the lead melody don't sound fluent. I suggest maybe rethinking just a little about what note you have the higher notes on as well as maybe a slightly different sound.
Hope this feedback helps a little.
Keep it up! ^^
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.