This is a very good song.
I liked the un-harmony which i pressume it was supposed to be. Its not VERY hip hop like its more of a experimental style. Anyways, a few things that could have made this a really good track. I suggest turning the overall volume down just tad to prevent overrides(when a song plays too loud the quality it distorts and can ruin quality). Its not so bad on this track though.
Also, its very MIDI-ish, try loosening the rythms up a but with some dotted notes, variations of the beat ect.
This song isnt perfect but has great pontential!
Iight... He's what u can do to fix up for the full version.
You need to cut that intro out a bit... it's way to long. I like the way the hat's came in and I thought it was gonna beat in and then all the sudden it stoped and did it again. THEN it came in.. that I like its good. Very unique for an entrance. Work on making those strings more realistic. and on this beat you REALLY need a piano. That bass u using, if you gonna use a piano, hit me up on aim, and ill teach you how to make some raw ass bass wit boobass and fl keys. Your drums need fixin'. Good for preview thou. Keep upin' jo.
we got ur back.
too bad just about everyone comes and votes my stuff zero.. im puttin one more song on NG and stoping cuz we got too many morons who wanna be funny and vote zeroes to make their p.o.s songs get up top