Nice.

This is a very good song.
I liked the un-harmony which i pressume it was supposed to be. Its not VERY hip hop like its more of a experimental style. Anyways, a few things that could have made this a really good track. I suggest turning the overall volume down just tad to prevent overrides(when a song plays too loud the quality it distorts and can ruin quality). Its not so bad on this track though.
Also, its very MIDI-ish, try loosening the rythms up a but with some dotted notes, variations of the beat ect.
This song isnt perfect but has great pontential!

T7