Pacy and energetic
I think that this certainly puts in perspective some of the more vivid aspects of nightmares, with the high speed "OMG, something's about to try and kill me" feel to the piece.
With how it's all gone together, you give the impression of a chase of some description, so there is a very real feel of fear, which might be exacerbated by the sound of someone going "aargh" and breathing heavily at the end, as they wake up, sit bolt upright and realise that it was just a dream.
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