Well
I gave you a 3/5 and a 5/10 because:
1: It's nice, repetitive but nice.
2: I've played guitar since i was 5 so, 16 years now it's been since i picked up my first guitar and pretty much the only thing i really have to say about the way you've played this song is that there are some parts where you need to get your rhythm down in your fingers, I don't know how long you've played and it doesn't concern me, but, (some advice) try to time your picking evenly, you do good on slowing down and speeding up, but once you're in the motions of playing fast you seem to get over excited (i dealt with this problem too starting out). a little heavy on the low E string there around the 5:00 mark but thats fine, maybe that's what you were going for.
Try to get a hook or a chorus in there somewhere, perfect your timing and change stuff up a little with your chords as the song progresses, and you could be a big shot!
Overall, good feel to the music and good job performing it!