love the intro

the lead synth ends up being too loud compared to your rhythm elements once you bring them in though.

bass seems kinda muted, beef that baby up! :)

once you bring the lead back in around 1:30 or so it`s at a more reasonable volume.

some more work coulda been spent on your build at the 2:20 or so mark. it sounds kinda abrupt/weird the way the hi-hats come in with the kick, maybe introduce just the kick at first?

btw, -love- the tom-roll sample you use, that is great stuff, you should definitely pump the volume on that! :)

to be honest, it shows that it only took you a day. hehe, not much focus/time was spent on transitions, which can really help keep your track rolling/interesting/energized.

regardless, the fact that you can get this far in a day shows that you can do much better if you really spend the time. :)

nice tune, man!