where did you come from??
this is wierd. but anywayz...
its tooo soft dude, i can give ya some pointers.
you got great vibes but it needs mastering.
hit me up sometime and i can sho ya a thing or two dude.
i'm king of this style right now so feel free to hit me up and maybe we can collab.
ever get on AIM?? if so my name is "MrJanglezz".
ight homie, peace.