I WANT THAT DAMN TONE! xD
Heh, anyways. I like the direction your heading in with the Djent style. The riffs were soothing and kick ass at the same time. Also, you ended the song quite perfectly, i may say.
However, the cons in my opinion. The melody just seemed a tad bit repetative, I was interested but not enough to put the score up to a ten. I'd recommend more "technical" riffs, i think they would enhance the power of this song. If you haven't heard this band, go listen to After the Burial, that is a band im pretty sure you could get some cool ideas and influence off of, as well as some bands like Volumes or Rooks. I like the direction you're going and i cant wait to hear more!
Hey man, thanks for the review!
Haha thank-you very much! I'm glad you liked the ending! :D
I get what you mean about the melody, and looking back over the 'nicer' songs that I've done, that chord progression is kind of a reocurring theme that needs to be changed! >.< I actually ordered ATB's new album the other day, should be coming for me soon!
I know Volumes but I shall check out Rooks!
Thanks again man, and I just found your PM so I'll go check out your new song now!