I'm in love with the instrumental! <3
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I feel like the song is lacking some low end presence, and the vocals are too far back in the mix. Perhaps some light chorus and fundamental boosting on the vocals(as well as overall signal boost by 6-10dB or so), and just some mid/low end emphasis on the rhythm guitar, with more high end emphasis on the lead to give them more separation. Melodically the track is pretty spot on, enjoying the progresions and the leads go together well harmonically, but the mixing needs help.
- LD -
Lyrically, you're pretty prolific. Your singing leaves something to be desired though.
Thanks man. I like the lyrics too. I'm talking about purgatory, and sins and when you die your soul is supposedly burned in fire to absolve you of your sins. I'm not religious but I liked the concept. Like holding metal over fire to kill germs. Holding yourself over the fire to kill the impurities in your heart and soul just sounds cool for me.
I dont know what else to say, but i love it. Can't wait for the final version, Keep it up.
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love your music. and your right about the techno thing. newgrounds audio portal sucks. do you have a website or something that you put your music up on? cause your awesome
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.