all's lost

I wish you made this longer. It's amazing so far.

I love it! Please finish it. The very calming beginning and the part 0:52 are just awesome!

longer

Cut off all except 0:51 and onwards and make it longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A Few Things

I understand what happened with the making of this song. And as you pointed out, you can kinda tell the difference in the thought patterns. The beginning of the song and the end were very different. The transition worked but it wasn't the best. I'd love to hear the two halfs of this song be put together and sound great. If the transitions were right it could very well work. Or, maybe take the last part of this song and expand it into it's own song so it will be more of an upbeat song. Then maybe take the first part and make it its own thing too, and have it be a softer song. Either way they would be great. I like the way your headed, you just got to get there. :) Hope to see a finished version of this soon!

And even though its a little sketchy, being an old fan of yours, I'm going to give you a ten and five. Mostly in hope of seeing an end product. :P Still, you did and have always done a wonderful job.